I didn't like how everyone was so beautiful.
I didn't like how all of the dudes except for Adam were sexist pigs.
I didn't like the superhero element. I thought that was lame.
Also the bit with the white bird went nowhere.
There was insta-love that seemed rushed and unnatural. I have a feeling that Juliette likes Warner, which is sick. Adam seemed nice... too nice. No teenage boy is that nice. It's like every girl's dream to find a nice guy like Adam, but that's all it is - a dream. Not gonna happen in real life.
Also, can someone explain to me why she's busting through concrete and doesn't make a big deal out of it? Shouldn't she be shitting bricks about that? AND WHAT FREAKING COLOR ARE HER EYES? Why doesn't she know? Sure, you haven't looked at yourself in a mirror for three years. I get that. But you have no memory from ages 0-14? Maybe you are a psycho chick.
One more thing that irked me was the scenery. I didn't feel that it was very well described. I found myself wondering where the heck I was and how I got there. The world building needed some oompf.
I kind liked the writing style, especially at the beginning. But then it seemed like Juliette went from one person, who I was accepting and starting to like, to some other gun-wielding badass in a heartbeat, and that's where she lost me.
I have no desire to continue the series.
This was definitely targeted towards teen readers. The more and more YA I read, the more I realize I'm no longer the right audience for the genre and that makes me sad. From now on, you might be seeing more and more adult fiction reviews from me and less YA.